Friday, January 16, 2015

Ella and Bella - lizzy

        I changed the story line because, like Zion, I didn't really care for the original story line.

              In the heart of Paris lived two impeccably rich sisters. The first sister was Bella, Bella was beautiful , kind, and had many friends. The second sister was Ella, Ella was pretty but not as pretty as Bella, and she was also mean, so not many people wanted to be her friend. Ella was also older than Bella, so she felt the need to get married before her perfect younger sister . So when Bella got engaged to the prince, Ella went completely insane and was obsessed over ruining Bella's wedding. First Ella locked Bella in a stinky old  closet. Then she dyed her hair to match the color of Bella's beautiful brown hair. After that she went to the wedding dressed in the same dress as Bella and acted as if she were Bella and she was the one getting married. After the wedding Bella was found in the closet and they put Ella in a mental hospital because she was absolutely wacko. In the end Bella forgave Ella even though she was never sorry.

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